I thought I would share with you the way I have worked with students in the past and the sorts of comments I provide. In general, I try to offer the writer the perspective an evaluator will have. This sometimes comes off as blunt, but I’m trying to genuinely share what goes through my mind. You can see that I don’t rewrite things, just offer suggestions, so it is still the original author’s work. Their work with added editing and expert advice. These are all anonymous and submitted with the author’s permission.
Internship Letter Second Draft
Internship Letter Fourth Draft